of course I had doubted her

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I believe Theresa now, although two weeks ago when she told me her story for the first time, of course I had doubted her. I don't doubt her anymore, not a single detail.

Source: At Home With the Horrors: 14 Tales by Sammy Scott

Why did the writer use “had doubted” instead of “doubted”?
 
That's a good question. In my opinion, they should have used the past simple.
 
I quite like the "had doubted" there, so I did some digging. Apparently, Scott first published this story on Reddit.

I think the fictional writer wrote "had doubted" because of what follows:
"... not a single detail. Because every day, she calls to tell me all over again."

He had doubted her (story) before his first realization that what she said was all true -- the next day she called again after she died.

Another possible connection is in the first paragraph:
"I knew it from the moment she had said, 'Daddy, Ray is here.'"

The last one is for my own amusement -- the fictional writer is already dead, so the readers are indeed reading a ghost story.
 
He had doubted her (story) before his first realization that what she said was all true -- the next day she called again after she died.
"although two weeks ago when she told me her story for the first time, of course I had doubted her."

Doesn't the sentence mean "he doubted Theresa before she told him her story for the first time"?
 
How could he doubt her story before she told it to him?
 
How could he doubt her story before she told it to him?
That’s why I don’t understand the use of “had doubted”.
 
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