[General] office letter starting

[abraham antony]

IF I START WITH A LETTER,,,,,1,WE WOULD LIKE TO BRING YOUR NOTICE 2.WE WOULD LIKE TO BRING IN TO YOUR NOTICE ...WHICH ONE IS CORRECT

 

[bhaisahab]

IF I START WITH A LETTER,,,,,1,WE WOULD LIKE TO BRING YOUR NOTICE 2.WE WOULD LIKE TO BRING IN TO YOUR NOTICE ...WHICH ONE IS CORRECT

Welcome to the forums, abraham antony. Please do not post in capital letters, except where appropriate. It is considered as shouting. The first one is correct.

 

[Barb_D]

I don't at all disagree that it's correct and the other is incorrect, but it might not be the most effective way to start your letter.

If you want to post more, you will get a more considered opinion.

 

[abraham antony]

thank you ..

 

[MikeNewYork]

IF I START WITH A LETTER,,,,,1,WE WOULD LIKE TO BRING YOUR NOTICE 2.WE WOULD LIKE TO BRING IN TO YOUR NOTICE ...WHICH ONE IS CORRECT

I have no idea what the context is, but it would be very common and natural to say "We would like to notify you that..."

 

[abraham antony]

ok thank you

 

[Rover_KE]

OK. Thank you.

Please note my corrections to your post.

While your appreciation is welcome, there is no need to write a new post to say thank you. Simply click the Like button on any posts you find helpful. It means that we don't have to open the thread again to read your new post and then find that it doesn't include any new information or an additional question.​