Anna232
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I wrote a few sentences about our public transport. Do you agree with my corrections? Could you answer my questions, please?
1. People are unhappy with public transport/transportation because of big distances between their homes and place of work, stores, clinics, etc.
I mean people aren't happy with the way it is organized. Buses, for example, don't come on time. Should I use "between their homes and workplaces" instead?
2. People spend a bunch of time for getting somewhere without cars and there are a lot of people with mental problems, criminal elements and even homeless people who can take buses without any problems.
Should it be "without any problem?" By mentioning people with mental problems and criminals I explain why it could be dangeous. Do you say "criminal elements?"
3. I have experinces of travelling on both transports but I would prefer train rather than plane because you have to pass several control places such as passport control, luggage control, and you have to check in your luggage.
Does "control place" make sense? I think it should be "I have experience travelling on both kinds of public transport/transportation but I would rather take a train than a plane."
4. You don't spend hours for registration and checking in your bags. I think it should be "You don't spend hours registrating and checking in your bags.
5. You can buy tickets using economy tariff, thus passengers can't eat or drink onboard except for situations when they pay. I would change it into: You can buy tickets using economy tariff but take into account that meals and drinks aren't included.
1. People are unhappy with public transport/transportation because of big distances between their homes and place of work, stores, clinics, etc.
I mean people aren't happy with the way it is organized. Buses, for example, don't come on time. Should I use "between their homes and workplaces" instead?
2. People spend a bunch of time for getting somewhere without cars and there are a lot of people with mental problems, criminal elements and even homeless people who can take buses without any problems.
Should it be "without any problem?" By mentioning people with mental problems and criminals I explain why it could be dangeous. Do you say "criminal elements?"
3. I have experinces of travelling on both transports but I would prefer train rather than plane because you have to pass several control places such as passport control, luggage control, and you have to check in your luggage.
Does "control place" make sense? I think it should be "I have experience travelling on both kinds of public transport/transportation but I would rather take a train than a plane."
4. You don't spend hours for registration and checking in your bags. I think it should be "You don't spend hours registrating and checking in your bags.
5. You can buy tickets using economy tariff, thus passengers can't eat or drink onboard except for situations when they pay. I would change it into: You can buy tickets using economy tariff but take into account that meals and drinks aren't included.