[General] Please check for correction

[GBEMY]

We have noticed that some of us still leave the power socket where our ups or laptop is plugged onto switched on after closing time. Please ensure that you switch off your power socket wherever it's located before leaving for the day. We pray not to experience any fire incident again.

 

[billmcd]

We have noticed that some of us still leave the power socket, where our ups or laptop is plugged, [STRIKE]onto[/STRIKE] switched on after closing time. Please ensure that you switch off your power socket wherever it's located before leaving for the day. We pray not to experience any fire incident again.

A couple of commas and omitting "onto" might help.