[General] Please check my Records!

[diephuy]

American - English is my second language. I want to improve my English to the higher level. And the first thing I have to practice more is my Pronunciation.

I will post my records on the forum and you please check my Pronunciation and show me the mistakes. Please help me because I'll graduate at my university soon and may get a better job

Here is the first record

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BzdNm5T2iFeRSWJQdG1HM1dDeDdPVXQxM1AzQ2NhRUJ5aFVz/edit

or http://vocaroo.com/i/s1QTlpJ9tCZ2

 

[Tdol]

Try recording yourself speaking naturally- reading lists doesn't sound natural.

 

[diephuy]

b/c I want to speak correctly every words first so I spoke slowly and separately