please,correct if there is any mistake

[happys82]

We aim to provide courses for students who are eager to learn chess. Course and activities are held in our school library. Chess is played quietly with a particular discipline. So that we teach our students for an internal discipline.
Another goal of our chess club is to make our students chess masters. In this way, it will be easy to participate in competitions. Moreover, we arrange chess tournaments each term.

 

[billmcd]

Looks OK. Only a few minor suggestions:

We aim to provide courses for students who are eager to learn chess. The course and activities are held in our school library. Chess is played quietly [STRIKE]with a particular discipline. So that we [/STRIKE]to teach our students [STRIKE]for an [/STRIKE]internal discipline.
Another goal of our chess club is to make our students chess masters. In this way, it will [STRIKE]be easy [/STRIKE] prepare them to participate in competitions. Moreover, we arrange chess tournaments each term.

 

[happys82]

Thanks a lot