Please find attached Glenn's request for cash advance

[PRD2021]

1. Please find attached Glenn's request for cash advance of $1800 to pay to his previous employer. Please advance him this amount and deduct it from his next month's salary.
2. Please find attached Glenn's cash advance request for $1800 to pay to his previous employer. Please advance him this amount and deduct it from his next month's salary.

Are the both sentences grammatically correct?

Thank you.

 

[Tarheel]

1. Please find attached Glenn's request for a cash advance of $1800 to pay to his previous employer. Please advance him this amount and deduct it from his next month's salary.
2. Please find attached Glenn's cash advance request for $1800 to pay to his previous employer. Please advance him this amount and deduct it from his next month's salary.

Are the both sentences grammatically correct?

(Thank me later.)

Yes.

 

[Tdol]

Why is he paying his former employer?

 

[PRD2021]

Why is he paying his former employer?

He had taken a loan from the former employer

 

[tedmc]

"Please advance him this amount" sounds redundant to me, after what is said in the first sentence.
I would say "Please made the payment".

 

[emsr2d2]

"Please made the payment".

Are you sure?

 

[tedmc]

Are you sure?

Please make the payment.