Please find attached my ledger that showing different amount from your account.

Nisha Shafi

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Yesterday bank send me ledger of my account that have different closing balance, please let me know how can i write email to them for eliminate the mistake. Also check these sentence and tell me which one is correct. (What or While).

check the email.

sir,
1-Please find attached my ledger that showing different amount from your account.
2-Please find attached my ledger while showing different amount from your account.
 

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Nisha, yet again I have changed your thread title. Please remember to use the word/sentence you are actually confused about in your titles.

Neither of your sentences is correct.

Please find attached my ledger showing the different amounts.
Please find attached my ledger, which shows the different amounts.
Please find attached the ledger that shows the different amounts.
 

Nisha Shafi

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yes sir, I am bit confused about title, I will be glade if you would gave me some example.
 

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[STRIKE]Yes, sir[/STRIKE]
You must not assume that all responders are male.

emsr2d2 is a well-respected and knowledgable female teacher.
 

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[STRIKE]yes sir,[/STRIKE] I am bit confused about the sentence in the title. I will be [STRIKE]glade[/STRIKE] glad if you would [STRIKE]gave[/STRIKE] give me some examples.

Read post #2 again. I already gave you the correct and natural versions.
 
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