kwfine
Member
- Joined
- Feb 3, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- British English
- Home Country
- Australia
- Current Location
- Hong Kong
Dear teachers,
I have this sentence in my diary:
It was great opportunity for all of us since we could have a bird's view of the nature from the window of the helicopter.
Since there were a few people with me in the helicopter, and we were all looking at the beautiful nature below us, I wonder if I should correct the sentence this way:
It was great opportunity for all of us since we could have bird's views of the nature from the window of the helicopter.
Please help me, teachers.
Thank you.
I have this sentence in my diary:
It was great opportunity for all of us since we could have a bird's view of the nature from the window of the helicopter.
Since there were a few people with me in the helicopter, and we were all looking at the beautiful nature below us, I wonder if I should correct the sentence this way:
It was great opportunity for all of us since we could have bird's views of the nature from the window of the helicopter.
Please help me, teachers.
Thank you.