doanhunghalinh
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I am a teacher of English and i am taking FCE examination next month. please help me correct this story.
Jakob was absolutely furious when he saw what was going on outside his window. He lived on the fourth floor of a flat which looked out over the streets. He could not bear to watch the annoying situation. An old poor blind man was sitting on the pavement and some young boys were teasing him by giving him some papers which were not money. The old man was nodding his head and thanking them continuously.
Jakob left the flat quickly, ran to the man and shouted angrily at the boys. They were really frightened and run away as fast as possible. Jakob then looked more carefully at the poor man. He was so shocked that he could not say anything at all. The man turned out to be his uncle who had left home two months ago. His family had found him everywhere but was unsuccessful.
Jakob was absolutely furious when he saw what was going on outside his window. He lived on the fourth floor of a flat which looked out over the streets. He could not bear to watch the annoying situation. An old poor blind man was sitting on the pavement and some young boys were teasing him by giving him some papers which were not money. The old man was nodding his head and thanking them continuously.
Jakob left the flat quickly, ran to the man and shouted angrily at the boys. They were really frightened and run away as fast as possible. Jakob then looked more carefully at the poor man. He was so shocked that he could not say anything at all. The man turned out to be his uncle who had left home two months ago. His family had found him everywhere but was unsuccessful.