Simple past (Active)

[Atchan]

1) When Thomson went for a long picnic with his parents he set up a tent but it collapsed in a strong wind.
2) My father printed a lot papers then he clipped them together.
3) Before Jane went her friend’s party she combed her long hair.
4) Tom climbed up a chair after he couldn’t get the top shelf.
5) Ahmed visited his parents who live in the rural after he bought a car.
6) I sent my cousin a letter after my best friend checked my prepared letter.

 

[Nightmare85]

***Neither a teacher nor a native speaker.***

1) When Thomson went for a long picnic with his parents he set up a tent but it collapsed in a strong wind.
2) My father printed a lot of papers then he clipped them together.
3) Before Jane went to her friend’s party she combed her long hair.
4) Tom climbed (up on) a chair after he couldn’t get the top shelf.
5) Ahmed visited his parents who live in the rural ___ after he bought a car.
6) I sent my cousin a (prepared) letter after my best friend checked it.

I believe you need a word after rural in sentence 5.
Maybe "rural area".

Let's see what the others will say...

P.S. No guarantee that my corrections are perfect :-D

Cheers!

 

[Atchan]

But you did a great job. Thank you my friend.