[Grammar] Statement of purpose

[musharaf]

Then I realized that everything in nature has its own place and functions and one filled with a plethora of remaining mysteries; may be there’s something we don’t yet figure it out, like pieces to a puzzle, where the things to put in?


Is this line OK? Please help...

 

[Rover_KE]

I'm afraid not.

You're trying too hard to sound academic. It is not grammatical and will impress nobody.

Rover