Student certificate

[bebe heart]

Hello, are there any errors in the application below?

Madam,
I kindly request student certificate for my son (x), student of class 10 of your school for it is required to renew his residency this week. I shall appreciate it. Thank you!

 

[teechar]

Hello, are there any errors in the application below?

Dear Madam,

I kindly request you to issue a student certificate for my son, Barry, who is a year-10 student at your school. [STRIKE]of class 10th for it[/STRIKE] I need that certificate [STRIKE]is required[/STRIKE] to renew his residency this week. [STRIKE]I shall appreciate it.[/STRIKE]

Please let me know when I can pick up the certificate from the school office.

Thank you!

Yours faithfully,

Bebe Heart

Will you pick up that certificate or do you need it sent somewhere?

 

[bebe heart]

I will pick it up myself.

 

[teechar]

Okay. See edit.