alpacinou
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Can I use "pinpricks" in the context of talking about car headlights?
Is this correct and natural?
John was exhausted, struggling to keep his eyes on the road. His eyelids were drooping. His vision had begun to blur. The road was as empty as his life. At the horizon, the outlines of dark mountains loomed over the road. John thought he saw a car in the distance coming towards him. There were to pinpricks of light getting bigger, streaking the night.
Is this correct and natural?
John was exhausted, struggling to keep his eyes on the road. His eyelids were drooping. His vision had begun to blur. The road was as empty as his life. At the horizon, the outlines of dark mountains loomed over the road. John thought he saw a car in the distance coming towards him. There were to pinpricks of light getting bigger, streaking the night.