alpacinou
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Hello.
In my short story, there are two mafia bosses at war. One of them sends an attractive woman to destroy the other. I want to suggest the woman was very tempting.
Can I use the word "tantalizingly"? Now, I have written a sentence which I know doesn't work for speaking but is it a good sentence for writing?
She was a poison pill, one that looked so tantalizingly good and harmless.
Also, what about the two adjectives that come after it? Do I have other options?
In my short story, there are two mafia bosses at war. One of them sends an attractive woman to destroy the other. I want to suggest the woman was very tempting.
Can I use the word "tantalizingly"? Now, I have written a sentence which I know doesn't work for speaking but is it a good sentence for writing?
She was a poison pill, one that looked so tantalizingly good and harmless.
Also, what about the two adjectives that come after it? Do I have other options?