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DerikSilva

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how can I improve this sentence:

[FONT=verdana, sans-serif]Thanks for all your love and support for our services and expect the same for our further journey.

further journey being out future projects.
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How can I improve this sentence?

Thanks for all your love and support for our services and expect the same for our further journey.

Further journey being our future projects.

Who will expect the same? Journey and project are different things.
 
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Thanks for all your love and support for our services and expect the same for our further journey.

The blue part is fine. The red part doesn't make sense and probably doesn't belong in the same sentence anyway.

Try telling us what you mean with the red part in a lot more words, and we'll help you phrase it correctly.
 

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Actually our service is at halt right now for building new features and solutions. So I need to add this sentence to thank every existing users and also expect their support and love for our new services and features.
 

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Actually our business has been suspended so we can make some changes. So I need to add this sentence to thank every existing customer and also tell them we expect their support and love for our new services and features.

Maybe it's different where you are, but where I'm from it would be considered very strange for a business to tell its customers such things. (Cordiality is one thing. Love is something else.) Also, I don't see why you have to shut down the business in order to make changes.
 

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Actually our service is at halt right now for building new features and solutions. So I need to add this sentence to thank every existing users and also expect their support and love for our new services and features.

NOT A TEACHER

"Thank you very much for being such loyal clients. We look forward to your continued support as we start introducing new services and features."
 

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"Thank you very much for being such loyal clients. We look forward to your continued support as we start introducing new services and features."
That's an excellent expression of gratitude (not "thanking statement").
 
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