'The cleaner?' she said, her eyes widening.

[99bottles]

'The cleaner?' she said, her eyes widening.

I found the above sentence on the page below (third paragraph). What I want to ask is: Would it be correct if one added with?

'The cleaner?' she said, with her eyes widening.

The Shadow Cabinet

The thrilling third installment to the Edgar-nominated, bestselling series Rory and her friends are reeling from a series of sudden and tragic events. While racked with grief, Rory tries to determine if she acted in time to save a member of the squad. If she did, how do you find a ghost? Also...

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[Tarheel]

I like the original better. It comes across very natural.

 

[99bottles]

I like the original better. It comes across very natural.

OK, but what's wrong with with?

 

[Tarheel]

OK, but what's wrong with with?

I don't know how to put it into words. I just see the other one as more natural.