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1. The key that makes a steamed stuffed bun delicious is that it is rich in juicy fillings.
2. The key to a tasty steamed stuffed bun is/lies in its juicy fillings.
→I wrote the first sentence, but my teacher said that there's something wrong with it, and she recommended me to write such a sentence like the second one. Could anyone please tell me what's wrong with my first sentence? And, is the second sentence really correct? I think that without "to make something delicious" wound be a little weak in meaning and not vivid enough. Thanks!
2. The key to a tasty steamed stuffed bun is/lies in its juicy fillings.
→I wrote the first sentence, but my teacher said that there's something wrong with it, and she recommended me to write such a sentence like the second one. Could anyone please tell me what's wrong with my first sentence? And, is the second sentence really correct? I think that without "to make something delicious" wound be a little weak in meaning and not vivid enough. Thanks!