the prospect appeared like a mirage

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Hello.

Have I used "mirage" correctly and naturally? Is the rest of the sentence okay?

The prospect of going out with her appeared more and more like a mirage. He convinced himself to let her go entirely.

What can I use instead of "prospect"?
 

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Yes, but illusion might work also.

The word possibility would work there.
 

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Prospect is more of formal. How about chance?

Illusion appeared like a mirrage?
 
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Prospect is more [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] formal. How about chance?

Illusion appeared like a [STRIKE]mirrage[/STRIKE] mirage?

Note my corrections above.

Your suggested sentence doesn't work at all.
 

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Illusion was suggested by Tarheel, not me.

Yes, but that was for a possible replacement for mirage. Not in addition to it.
 

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Illusion was suggested by Tarheel, not me.

I know that, but I thought you were expanding by suggesting that sentence. I thought the question mark indicated that you meant "How about using this: ...?"
 

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Yes, but that was for a possible replacement for mirage. Not in addition to it.

The OP asked for a another word for prospect, not mirage.
 
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