These days, many students tend to be over-reliant on AI-powered tools for study or work ...

[Linlih]

These days, many students tend to be over-reliant on AI-powered tools for study or work, which many inhibit their creativity and independence (120-150 words)
(You can rate my essay on a scale of 10 thank you, and this is my first time, i haven't written an essay before huhu)
Nowadays, AI is very popular. It brings us a lot of advantages like: fast information, it is easy to use,.. however, it brings many disadvantages too. Many students tend to be over-reliant on AI for study or work, which inhibit their creativity and independence.
In my option, it is true that AI-powered tools may inhibit students' creativity and independence. we don't use our brain to think any more, which make us be lazy and inhibit our creativity. AI- powered tools also make you don't trust your own knowledge, you don't have your own option, just need AI to found the fast answer without thinking so it mays inhibit our independence.But if we know how to use it in a healthy, good way; and we should use our head to deal with thingss in our life to keep us alive and not too useless then I'm sure AI will be a wonderful thing human have created.
thanks
(i feel embarassed about my E )

 

[emsr2d2]

Essay prompt: These days, many students tend to be over-reliant on AI-powered tools for study or work, which many inhibit their creativity and independence (120-150 words)

Nowadays, AI is very popular. It brings us a lot of advantages, like: such as fast access to information, and it is easy to use. However, it brings has many disadvantages too. Many students tend to be over-reliant on AI for study or work, which inhibits their creativity and independence.

In my option opinion, it is true that AI-powered tools may inhibit students' creativity and independence. We don't use our brains to think any more, which makes us be lazy and inhibits our creativity. AI-powered tools can also make you don't distrust your own knowledge; you don't have your own option opinions, you just need use AI to found find the fast answer quickly without thinking, so it mays may inhibit our independence. (space here) But However, if we know learn how to use it in a healthy, good way sensibly, and we should use our heads, to deal with thingss in our life to keep us alive and not too useless then I'm sure AI will turn out to be a wonderful thing human have created. invention.

(You can Please rate my essay on a scale of 1-10. Thank you. and This is my the first time no comma here I haven't have written an essay.) before huhu)

Thanks.
(I feel embarrassed about my English.)

Welcome to the forum, @Linlih.

Don't be embarrassed about anything here. You're a learner. You came here for help with your English and that's what we aim to provide.

Please look at my changes and comments carefully. Read the amended essay through at least three times so that you notice everything.

There are a few rules that you must follow at all times in written English:
- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with one appropriate punctuation mark.
- Always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular pronoun).

Specifically with regard to this essay:
- Check words carefully. Twice, you wrote "option" when you meant "opinion".
- Try not to simply keep repeating phrases from the essay prompt. The idea is for you to write your own text. In the first paragraph, you copied the essay prompt almost word for word. You went on to use "inhibit students' creativity and independence" again at the start of the next paragraph. Just one sentence later, you wrote "inhibits our creativity", and in the next sentence "inhibit our independence".
- The whole part about "deal with things in life to keep us alive and not too useless" was completely meaningless.

Three more things:
- I have underlined the word "many" in the essay prompt. Are you certain that's what it said or did you mistype "may"?
- Where did you find the essay prompt? If you took it from a website, please give the name of the site and/or a link. If it was in a book, please provide the title of the book and the name(s) of the author(s).
- I have no idea what "huhu" was supposed to mean but it's not a word.

 

[teechar]

this is my first time

Are you practising for a particular test? If so, which one?

 

[Linlih]

Are you practising for a particular test? If so, which one?

this one On the last page is the above essay

 

[Linlih]

Three more things:
- I have underlined the word "many" in the essay prompt. Are you certain that's what it said or did you mistype "may"?
- Where did you find the essay prompt? If you took it from a website, please give the name of the site and/or a link. If it was in a book, please provide the title of the book and the name(s) of the author(s).
- I have no idea what "huhu" was supposed to mean but it's not a word.

I found essay prompt here... that file below and thank you!

 

[teechar]

this one

The question asks you to write one paragraph, not a whole essay.
See the correction provided by @emsr2d2 above.

 

[tedmc]

I find that the word "inhibit" is used too many times. I would use variations like "discourage/restrain/suppress/hinder" to avoid repetition.

 

[Linlih]

I find that the word "inhibit" is used too many times. I would use variations like "discourage/restrain/suppress/hinder" to avoid repetition.

thank youu

 

[emsr2d2]

Thank youu you.

Even a sentence as short as this must follow all the normal rules:
- Start with a capital letter.
- Spell all words in the standard way.
- End with an appropriate punctuation mark.