to make a sentence "the right fit"

[thomas615]

Accepting a temporary to permanent position at ABC company is a good way for me to find out if I like working in that company and if I am right fit for that job and also a good way for the employer to asses my work performance.

 

[emsr2d2]

Accepting a temporary to permanent position at ABC company is a good way for me to find out if I like working in that company and if I am right fit for that job and also a good way for the employer to asses my work performance.

Do you have a question?

 

[thomas615]

Are there any grammar errors on this sentence?

 

[Barb_D]

It's grammatical, perhaps, but it's a bit of a run-on. I'd stop the first sentence before "and also" and create a new sentence there that begins "It is also..."

 

[Raymott]

Accepting a temporary to permanent position at ABC company is a good way for me to find out if I like working in that company and if I am right fit for that job and also a good way for the employer to asses my work performance.

But why do you put "the right fit" as your subject, and not use that phrase in your sentence. Was it merely a lapse, omitting "the"?
In any case, put it in.

 

[Barb_D]

Oops. I didn't read carefully enough. I just assumed based on the title of the thread that it was in there.