Korargol
New member
- Joined
- Oct 3, 2016
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Polish
- Home Country
- Poland
- Current Location
- Poland
Hello,
I'd like to ask for grammar check, im not sure if i've used all times and stuff corretly, i'll by very greateful if you could point out all the errors you can find so i can see how i did, thank you very much!
Dear Alice,
Thanks for your email.
Unfortunately, I can't accept your invitation, I'd love to visit you, but my parents won't allow me to travel so far abroad on my own, they're worried that I might get lost.
Me and my family spend easter with our best friend – Satan. We summon him through the forbidden satanic ritual that I can't tell you the details about. After we work out the sacrificies, we all eat dinner at the table.
It would be lovely if you could come to visit me during the Easter instead. I know your parents trust you enough to let you travel abroad by yourself. You could join our feast with Satan, and get to know a little about the afterlife, it will be fun!
Keep in touch
lots of love
XYZ
I'd like to ask for grammar check, im not sure if i've used all times and stuff corretly, i'll by very greateful if you could point out all the errors you can find so i can see how i did, thank you very much!
Dear Alice,
Thanks for your email.
Unfortunately, I can't accept your invitation, I'd love to visit you, but my parents won't allow me to travel so far abroad on my own, they're worried that I might get lost.
Me and my family spend easter with our best friend – Satan. We summon him through the forbidden satanic ritual that I can't tell you the details about. After we work out the sacrificies, we all eat dinner at the table.
It would be lovely if you could come to visit me during the Easter instead. I know your parents trust you enough to let you travel abroad by yourself. You could join our feast with Satan, and get to know a little about the afterlife, it will be fun!
Keep in touch
lots of love
XYZ
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