Volunteer work

[gozuhair]

Hi
I want to write a letter to the supervisor and request him to give me the chance to work in his organization as a volunteer basis, please suggest. how to write my objective.

 

[billmcd]

Hi
I want to write a letter to the supervisor and request him to give me the chance to work in his organization as a volunteer basis, please suggest. how to write my objective.

Write it, post it and we'll review/comment.

 

[Rover_KE]

Say '...as a volunteer' or '...on a voluntary basis' - not ...'as a volunteer basis'.

Rover

 

[gozuhair]

Thanks for the reply, will write a letter and then post it.

 

[gozuhair]

Hi All
I tried to write the following volunteer letter, I really need you to improve the below letter.

[FONT=Tahoma][FONT=Tahoma]I am writing this letter in hopes of establishing a volunteer relationship with the abc company, it is my dream to work with your organization and provide my services  for  the  organization. I am willing to submit to a background check as per any volunteer regulations set forth by the organization as well as I will also submit references if needed, my aim is to help the organization in any way that I can.[/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma]I have more than nine years of experience as an Analyst Programmer specialized in Oracle Forms and Reports. I have a Master degree in Information Technology from Preston University, I have also completed my 2 years advance diploma program  in computer science from NCR Education Centre, as well as, I have cleared Oracle Certified Professional in database administration track examination from Oracle corporation that is globally recognized. [/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma]Please feel free to contact me on my mobile no that 306-209-2326 at any time with any questions or concerns, or to schedule a volunteer interview.[/FONT]
 
[FONT=Tahoma]Regards[/FONT]
[/FONT]

 

[billmcd]

Hi All
I tried to write the following volunteer letter, I really need you to improve the below letter.

[FONT=Tahoma][FONT=Tahoma]I am writing this letter in hopes of establishing a volunteer relationship with the abc company[COLOR=red].[/COLOR] [COLOR=red]I[/COLOR]t is my dream to work with your organization and provide my services[COLOR=red]. [/COLOR] [STRIKE]for  the  organization.[/STRIKE] I am willing to submit to a background check as per any volunteer regulations set forth by the organization [STRIKE]as well as[/STRIKE] [COLOR=red]and[/COLOR] I will also submit references if needed[COLOR=red]. [/COLOR][COLOR=red]M[/COLOR]y [STRIKE]aim[/STRIKE] [COLOR=red]desire[/COLOR] is to help the organization in any way that I can.[/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma]I have more than nine years [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] experience as an Analyst Programmer specializ[COLOR=red]ing[/COLOR] in Oracle Forms and Reports. I have a Master[COLOR=red]s [/COLOR]degree in Information Technology from Preston University[COLOR=red].[/COLOR] I have also completed my 2 years advance diploma program  in computer science from NCR Education Centre, [STRIKE]as well as,[/STRIKE] [COLOR=red]and[/COLOR] I have cleared (? [COLOR=red][I]passed the[/I][/COLOR]) Oracle Certified Professional in database administration track examination from Oracle [COLOR=red]C[/COLOR]orporation that is globally recognized. [/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma]Please feel free to contact me on my mobile [STRIKE]no that [/STRIKE] [COLOR=red]?[/COLOR] 306-209-2326 at any time with any questions or concerns, or to schedule a volunteer interview.[/FONT]
 
[FONT=Tahoma]Regards[/FONT]
[/FONT]

Suggestions.

 

[gozuhair]

Hi
Anxiously waiting for your help.

 

[Rover_KE]

Bill helped yesterday.

 

[gozuhair]

Thank you very much for your help. I really appreciate it.