[Grammar] Walking

[QuanLe]

Do you like walk?
Do you like to walk on your own or with others?
Would you say that your city is a good place for walking?

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I do like walk with others, especially with my girlfriend. My girlfriend is 20, her name is Anna. Anna and I live in RRR, in RRR there are many walking streets, the landscape is beautiful, the atmosphere is clean. On walking streets there are many kids are flying kites, or playing with their parents. So RRR is a good place for walking.
About us, we usually walk in the everyday morning, while walking we often talk about each other to learn from each other.

 

[tedmc]

QuanLe
What is the question that you want to ask?

 

[QuanLe]

QuanLe
What is the question that you want to ask?

Correct my essay, please.

 

[teechar]

Do you like walking?
Do you like to walk on your own or with others?
Would you say that your city is a good place for walking?

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I do like walking with others; I especially like to go for (long) walks with my girlfriend. [STRIKE]My girlfriend[/STRIKE] She is 20 years old, and her name is Anna. Anna and I live in RRR [STRIKE], in RRR[/STRIKE] where there are many streets that are great for walking, [STRIKE]streets,[/STRIKE] and where the landscape is beautiful and the [STRIKE]atmosphere[/STRIKE] air is clean. [STRIKE]On walking streets there are[/STRIKE] On our walks, we often see many kids [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] flying kites or playing with their parents. So RRR is a good place for walking.
[STRIKE]About us,[/STRIKE] We usually go for a walk [STRIKE]in the[/STRIKE] every [STRIKE]day[/STRIKE] morning, and while walking, we often talk about [STRIKE]each other[/STRIKE] all sorts of things to learn [STRIKE]from[/STRIKE] about each other.

Note that I altered your first sentence to avoid the potential implication that you like going for a walk as a group (with others and your girlfriend).

 

[emsr2d2]

Correct my essay, please.

When are you going to submit your essay to your English teacher?

 

[QuanLe]

I do not know, how I do it?

 

[emsr2d2]

Do you have an English teacher? Are you taking English classes? Why did you write this essay?

 

[QuanLe]

Hi emsr2d2,
I learn English by myself.

 

[emsr2d2]

Hi emsr2d2,
I am learning English by myself.

OK. I suggest that you make that clear if you post in this section, otherwise people might think you're asking for help with your homework. Perhaps you could start each post with "I'm learning English by myself and I have written the following essay for practice. Please check it for errors."