we have a client who wants to install

[Joj]

Hello, can someone help me with editing correctly the paragraph below?

Dear team,

We have a client who wants to install a 4kw inverter but only wants to power his fridge because he does not live in the house. According to your previous email, you recommend at least two lithium-ion batteries with one inverter. The client intends to add more batteries once he moves in.
Can we only supply him one battery right now because he isn't using anything other than the fridge? (500watt)

 

[Tarheel]

Hello, can someone help me with editing correctly the paragraph below?

Dear team,

We have a client who wants to install a 4kw inverter but only wants to power his fridge, because he does not live in the house. According to your previous email, you recommend at least two lithium-ion batteries with one inverter. The client intends to add more batteries once he moves in. Can we only supply him with one battery right now because he isn't using anything other than the fridge? (500watt)

When I edit something it is always the hope that I will do it correctly.

 

[emsr2d2]

You need to move "only" in both instances.

... but wants to power only his fridge
Can we supply him with only one battery ...

 

[tedmc]

Hello, can someone help me with editing correctly the paragraph below?

Dear team,

We have a client who wants to install a 4-kw inverter but only wants to power only his fridge because he does not live in the house. According to your previous email, you recommend at least two lithium-ion batteries with one inverter. The client intends to add more batteries once he moves in.
Can we only supply him with only one battery right now because he isn't using electricity for anything else other than the fridge? (500watt)

See above.

 

[emsr2d2]

tedmc's "anything else other than the fridge" is incorrect.

You can say either "for anything else" (that should be the end of the sentence) or "for anything other than the fridge".