We will be on their 12 anniversary event.

[Joj]

We will be on their 12 anniversary event. Where we gonna match the environmental by a clean up, the humanitarian to donate money for the cancer patients and fun for dancing and winning prize. I was so excited that the event will be set on your resort.

 

[teechar]

We will be on their 12 anniversary event.

Who does "their" refer to, and should some form of "attend" be there?

Where we gonna match the environmental by a clean up, the humanitarian to donate money for the cancer patients and fun for dancing and winning prize.

I have absolutely no idea what that means! Reword it.

I was so excited to hear/learn that the event will be set on held in your resort.

What kind of resort are you talking about?

 

[Joj]

We will be on X's 12 anniversary event. Where we gonna organize a clean up on all along the beach of XX.I was so excited to hear that the event will be held in your resort.

 

[teechar]

I still don't fully understand. Who are you writing that to?

 

[Joj]

I still don't fully understand. Who are you writing that to?

To the director of the resort

 

[teechar]

Write separate sentences to describe each part. For example,
1- We will be attending/participating in your 12th anniversary event/celebration.
2- We will take part in your environmental campaign with our "Clean up the Beach" project.
etc.

 

[Tarheel]

What happened? (Joj, you seem to have taken a giant step backwards. )