What about my accent?

[Osok]

I just wonder

I would be as pleased as Punch
If you would check it

Here is the link: https://soundcloud.com/osok-1/alice-in-wonderland-chapter-1

Thanks in advance

 

[Benny P]

Hi there Osok,

I listened to your recording and I think you made a good effort. Would you like some tips on how you might improve your accent?

 

[Osok]

Thank you for your replay)
I think I know almost all the ways of improving my accent, but if you say something new, I will appreciate it)