[General] What are the students like in Harvard University?

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In my online group there's a student who's studying in Harvard University. The other day when people knew that she's a Harvard student, many asked her questions. I asked her one "What are the students like in Harvard University? Do you really get up at 4 am to study?"

I heard a gossip saying that students in Harvard get up at 4 am every day to study in the library. So I wanted to know if it's true. Are my italic sentences okay?
 
In my online group, there's a student who's studying [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] at Harvard University. The other day, when people [STRIKE]knew[/STRIKE] found out/discovered that she's a Harvard student, many asked her questions. I asked her one, which was "What are the students like [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] at Harvard University? Do you really get up at 4 am to study?"

I heard a [STRIKE]gossip[/STRIKE] rumour [STRIKE]saying[/STRIKE] that students [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] at Harvard get up at 4 am every day to study in the library. [STRIKE]So[/STRIKE] I wanted to know if it's true. Are my italic sentences okay?

See above. Note that "gossip" is uncountable so you can't have "a gossip".

I would change the order of the opening information. Sentence 1 suggests that you already knew she was a Harvard student. You then say "people" (and I assumed that included you) found that out. Try opening with:

The other day, we discovered that one of the members of our online group is a student at Harvard. We had lots of questions for her. I asked her ...
 
All of them get up that early?
 
All of them get up that early?

Not if a book I read (by Cleveland Amory) is accurate. No way would those particular Harvard students have gotten up that early.
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