[General] What I'm doing today is....

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Today I picked up the trash in my neighborhood. I've been doing this for a few years. I pick only plastics because they're not bio-degradable. I wrote a sentence to express the idea:

What I'm doing today is to pick up the trash of our neighborhood, especailly plastics because they're not bio-degradable.

Is my sentence natural?
 
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My suggestion:

"What I'm doing today is picking up the trash in our neighbourhood."

I might be wrong, but plastics sounds like types of plastic. Perhaps: plastic trash.

You've said you pick only that. Especially doesn't work, then. It would suggest you pick up all the trash, but are extra careful with plastic trash.
 
Today I picked up [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] trash in my neighborhood. I've been doing this for a few years. I pick up only [STRIKE]plastics[/STRIKE] plastic because [STRIKE]they're[/STRIKE] it's not bio-degradable. I wrote a sentence to express the idea:

What I'm doing today is [STRIKE]to pick[/STRIKE] picking up [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] trash [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] in our neighborhood. [STRIKE]especailly plastics[/STRIKE] I pick up/I concentrate on plastic because [STRIKE]they're[/STRIKE] it's not bio-degradable.

Is my sentence natural?

emsr2d2
 
To me "...plastics...they're.. " is perfectly acceptable because there are many types of plastics. Which kinds may be recyclable varies widely from place to place. Only a few kinds are biodegradable.
 
The trash suggests you did all the trash.
 
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