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At this resort, I will spend one month without being in contact with my annoying family.

Maybe it's just me, but something about this sentence seems off. Is it correct, or is there a better way of writing this?
 

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So the fact that you moved it here means that it is at least grammatically correct?
 

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There is nothing wrong with the sentence. It means he won't be around them (in contact with them).
 

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It's grammatically correct but not very natural. I wouldn't use "without being in contact with". I'd use "with no contact with my annoying family" or "without any contact with my annoying family".
 

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It's grammatically correct but not very natural. I wouldn't use "without being in contact with". I'd use "with no contact with my annoying family" or "without any contact with my annoying family".

I just thought of something else: '... spend one month out of touch with...' Is this correct/natural?
 

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I think it's fine.
 

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So the fact that you moved it here means that it is at least grammatically correct?
I moved it to Editing & Writing Topics as it's your own writing which needs editing.

I assume it's your own writing as you didn't state the source and author of somebody else's writing.
 

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I just thought of something else: '... spend one month out of touch with...' Is this correct/natural?

It is not as strong as Emsr2d2's with no contact for me.
 
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