Letter of motivation to Uni. *Urgent*

[larpa]

Hello everyone,

So I am aplying to Japan and I need to get my letter of motivation done during this week. Only problem is that anyone at my University who could help me, are having a summer holiday. Then I found this forum and came asking for help. I hope that someone could proof-read my letter. Other tips are also welcome of course.

There are still one or two sentences which are kinda "stupid" and I am going to change those but the main concern now is the proof-reading.

Thanks in advance.

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[larpa]

Could really use some help..