Please help me write complaint letter to HM Revenue.nt l

[mario1988]

Hello,

My English is no good and I would be grateful if you would help me deal with my problem

So in Juny after three weeks waiting I recived letter that I will get tax back but they made an mistake in my sort code and on this latter is incorect.After 2 called to theirs office in Cardiff and they told me that I have to sent them formal letter to inform about that so i did that.Two weaks ago send tax and I also did not recive any reply


I have no idea how to write this type of formal letter to be correct and to be thret seriosly

Regards
mario

[wise owl]

Can you write the letter in your words first?

[mario1988]

To: Head Manager (?)
HM Revenue
Cardiff

COMPLAINT

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about the service in your office.


From three months I am waiting for my tax back because someone made an mistake In my sort code.I called to your office in Cardiff and they told me that I have to sent formal letter to inform about that so I did that three weeks ago I also send fax.
I still did not receive any reply even so I gave you all my details e-mail,mobile number etc.
I hope you will solve this problem or I will have to contact with The Adjudicator's Office.
I also want to claim back reasonable costs that I have spend as a direct result of your mistakes or delay such as: postage,phone calls,fax.



Please confirm by email that you received this letter.

Yours faithfully,
xxxx

[Anglika]

To: Complaints Manager
HM Revenue
Cardiff

COMPLAINT

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about the service in your office.


From three months I am have been waiting for my tax back refund, due because someone made an mistake In my sort code.I called your office in Cardiff and they told me that I have to send a formal letter to inform containing full information on the error. about that so I sent that three weeks ago. I also send sent a fax. Since I had no reply, I then sent my e-mail, mobile phone number etc.
I any reply even so I gave you all my details e-mail,mobile number etc.
I hope you will be able solve this problem or I will have to contact with the Adjudicator's Office.
I also want to claim back reasonable costs that I have spent as a direct result of your mistakes or delay such as: postage, phone calls, fax.

Please confirm by email that you have received this letter.

Yours faithfully,
xxxx

If no response is received to this, then go to the "Director with Overall Responsibility".

The Adjudicator is the last resort.

[mario1988]

thank you very much :*

is it bad idea to try sent this by fax and then if I don get reply by post ?

[thod00]

Fax? Nobody sends faxs any more. You can send by e-mail, or by post. If you are paranoid, you can send a registered letter so they cannot deny they received it. I would send a regular written letter, there is a tendency to deny having ever received the e-mail.

[wise owl]

hi, this is how I would correct this letter:

To: Head Manager (?)
HM Revenue
Cardiff

COMPLAINT

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about the service in your office.


From three months I have been waiting for my tax refund, because someone made a mistake in my sort code. I called your office in Cardiff and they told me that I have to send a formal letter explaining the case. I sent this letter via post and fax three weeks ago.
I haven't received any reply since then, despite the fact that I provided you with all my details, such as e-mail, mobile number etc.
I hope you will solve this problem as soon as possible, otherwise I will have to contact The Adjudicator's Office.
I also want to claim back reasonable costs that I spend as a direct result of your mistakes and delays such as: postage, phone calls and fax.



Please confirm by email that you received this letter.

Yours faithfully,
xxxx

[Anglika]

thank you very much :*

is it bad idea to try sent this by fax and then if I don get reply by post ?

Only if you can have guaranteed notification that the fax was received and read. As Thod say, far better to send it by post, if possible in such a way that it must be signed for in Cardiff. You could fax and also send a letter, stating in the fax that you have done this and when the letter was posted.

The problem with dealing with large government agencies is that they are very liable to deny receipt of faxes or e-mails. Of course, on e-mail it is possible to have a "read" notification.
Unfortunately this is a very bad time of year to be chasing this department as they are dealing with so many claims.

[hznaeem]

From three months.... is wrong grammatically, it should be For three months...., you can't say 'from' with 'have been', have/has been comes only with since or for. Thanks.