Kindly edit my letter

[Eugene1982]

Hi everyone,

Please find time to check my letter below. Many thanks in advance.
__________________________________________________ ____




Date : 27 January 2010
To : Car and Services
Attention : Mr. Abdel Fatah
Subject : Transportation services
Telephone No. : aaa-bbbb
Fax No. : aaa-cccc


Dear Mr. Fatah,

Please send me pamphlets and brochures of your available tourist buses.

I came to know your services through an article published by the Daily Tribune. This is a timely scenario since we will be having a field trip in Damman on February 28, 2010 wherein we will be hiring a special and unique tourist buses. I would like to consider your services.

I will appreciate it much if you can also send me a copy of the terms, conditions and cost of hiring your special buses.

I am looking forward hearing from you as soon as possible.

Sincerely yours,

Ddddd E. Fffff
Secretary

[Gillnetter]

Hi everyone,

Please find time to check my letter below. Many thanks in advance.
__________________________________________________ ____




Date : 27 January 2010 January 27, 2010
To : Car and Services
Attention : Mr. Abdel Fatah
Subject : Transportation services
Telephone No. : aaa-bbbb
Fax No. : aaa-cccc


Dear Mr. Fatah,

Please send me pamphlets and brochures of your available tourist buses.

I came to know read about your services through in an article published by in the Daily Tribune. This is a was timely scenario since we will be having a field trip in Damman on February 28, 2010 wherein we will be hiring a special and unique tourist buses bus. I would like to consider your services.

I will appreciate it much if you can also send me a copy of the terms, conditions, and cost of hiring your special buses.

I am looking forward hearing from you as soon as possible.

Sincerely yours,

Ddddd E. Fffff
Secretary

You should include your address to that the bus company can send you the material requested.

[Eugene1982]

Thanks for a million Gillnetter.