Is there someone who can please edit my letter here? many thanks in advance

[Eugene1982]

Dear Dr. Aaaaa,
Our office here in Jeddah is urgently in need of engineers with the following requirements:
I. One (1) Electrical Engineer: (a.) licensed & professional engineer
(b.) minimum experience of at least 5 years
(c.) expose in construction and design
(d.) ex- abroad is x factor
(e.) experience in low and medium voltage

II. One (1) Architectural Engineer: (a.) licensed & professional engineer
(b.) minimum experience of at least 5 years
(c.)expose in supervision and design
(d.) former abroad is advantage
(e.)knowledgeable in autocad, 3D Max and MS offices
applications

May we request therefore to please send us prospect candidates based on the above-mentioned requirements.

We are looking forward for an immediate feedback from you.

Many thanks and best regards,

Engr. Bbbbb Ccccc
General Manager

[Anglika]

Dear Dr. Aaaaa,
Our office here in Jeddah is urgently in need of engineers with the following requirements:

I. One (1) Electrical Engineer:
(a.) licensed & professional engineer
(b.) minimum experience of at least 5 years
(c.) expose in has worked in construction and design
(d.) ex- abroad is x factor Previous overseas experience is an advantage
(e.) experience in low and medium voltage

II. One (1) Architectural Engineer:
(a.) licensed & professional engineer
(b.) minimum experience of at least 5 years
(c.) experienced in supervision and design
(d.) former abroad is advantage Previous overseas experience is an advantage
(e.)knowledgeable in autocad, 3D Max and MS Office
applications

May we request therefore to please send us prospect lists of prospective candidates based on the above-mentioned requirements. We would appreciate these as soon as possible.

We are looking forward for an immediate feedback from you.

Many thanks and best regards,

Engr. Bbbbb Ccccc
General Manager

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[Eugene1982]

Thanks for a million Anglika.