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Please correct my formal letter!
Dear Mr. Parker,
Your student , Jone Jonaite, is writing to you. I would like to inform you that I am ill and can not attend in the lessons.
I had a headache and started to cough after lessons yesterday. then I was in nurse’s cabinet and she counseled me to drink a lot of tea and have rest. I felt worse in the morning. I am have temperature, mucle and throat pain. I suspect that I have pneumonia. So I would like to call a doctor. But I do not know how it do. Could you help me and give a advice about it.
I would account for the overdue lessons. I would like to do all tasks or write a paper in you’s own good time.
Thank you for you time and consideration.
Your sincerely,
Jone Jonaite
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Re: Please correct my formal letter!

Originally Posted by
anzelkaaa
Dear Mr. Parker,
My name is Jone Jonaite and I am a student of yours. I would like to inform you that I am ill and can not attend your lessons.
I became aware of my illness yesterday, when I started to cough and had a teeble headache. The nurse adviced me to drink a lot of tea and have rest. But next morning it got worse; I am having a high temperature, mucle and throat pain. I suspect that I have pneumonia and I would like to call a doctor. But I do not know how it do. Could you please help me and give me some advice ?
I will make up for all overdue lessons. I would also like to do all tasks or write a paper in your own good time.
Thanking you for your time and consideration.
Your sincerely,
Jone Jonaite
Hi, Jone
I have corrected your letter. I think you can send it to your professor. Take care!
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