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[excitekps]

Dear Sir

I am planning to bring my wife to here in Dubai for one month visit over the forthcoming her annual vacation. (April 15th to May 15th 2010).

I request your good office to issue me a non objection letter to obtain visa from the ministry. All expenses for this visa will be borne by me.

I hope you will favorably consider my request.

Thanking you


Yours Sincerely

jace

[bhaisahab]

Dear Sir

I am planning to bring my wife to here in Dubai for one month visit over the forthcoming her annual vacation. (April 15th to May 15th 2010).

I request your good office to issue me a non objection letter to obtain visa from the ministry. All expenses for this visa will be borne by me.

I hope you will favorably consider my request.

Thanking you


Yours Sincerely

jace

I am planning to bring my wife here to Dubai for one month during her forthcoming annual vacation. (April 15th to May 15th 2010).

I request that you issue me a non objection letter so that I can obtain a visa for her from the ministry. All expenses for this visa will be borne by me.

I hope you will favorably consider my request.

Thanking you