Opinion composition

[Vasare]

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Computer - one of the most modern technology XXI century. All people have at least one computer at home. However increasing use of computers gives not just advantages but disadvantages.
I think that computer have more positive effects than negative one. First, it help faster to do homeworks. You do not clutter up a room with books. Computer programmes are English language therefore it help to enrich our vocabulary. Finally, an online computer support phone and TV funcions.
Other people have a different point of view about increasing use of computers. Doctors say that the computer is harmful to our eyes and spine. Psychologists argue that children become dependent on the computer. Specialists in Lithuanian philology claims that children from an early age speak and write wrongly, because a lot of programmes do not use lithuanian alphabet.
In conclusion, I think that people should use computers moderately. Then they will avoid the negative consequences.

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I would appreciate if someone correct my letter.


Computer is one of the most modern technology XXI century. All people have at least one computer at home. However, the increasing use of computers has both advantages and disadvantages.
I think that computer have has more positive effects than negative ones. First, it helps faster to do homeworks quickly. You do not have to clutter up a room with books.

Computer programmes are in English language, therefore it helps to enrich our vocabulary. Finally, an online computer supports phone and TV funcions.

Others people have a different point of view about the increasing use of computers. Doctors say that the computer is harmful to our eyes and spine. Psychologists argue that children become dependent on the computer. Specialists in Lithuanian philology claims that children from an early age speak and write wrongly, because a lot of programmes do not use lithuanian alphabet.
In conclusion, I think that people should use computers moderately. Then So that they will avoid the negative consequences.

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[Vasare]

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[Gillnetter]

I would appreciate if someone correct my letter.


Computers are one of the most modern technology technological developments of the XXI (Twentieth) century. All people have at least one computer at home (Even the tribal members in the high country of Peru? Even the native peoples of the interior of Brazil? All is a BIG word and should be used with special care.). However, the increasing use of computers gives not just advantages but disadvantages.
I think that computers have more positive effects than negative ones. First, it helps students do their homework faster to do homeworks. You do not clutter up a room with books. Computer programmes are in the English language therefore, it helps to enrich our vocabulary (Interesting - the computer programs in Mexico are in Spanish.). Finally, an online computer support phone and TV funcions (Unsure of the meaning here).
Other people have a different point of view about the increasing use of computers. Doctors say that the computer is harmful to our eyes and spine. Psychologists argue that children become dependent on the computer. Specialists in Lithuanian philology claims that children from an early age speak and write wrongly, because a lot of programmes do not use the Lthuanian alphabet.
In conclusion, I think that people should use computers moderately, then, they will avoid the negative consequences.

gil