Please check my letter :]

[valfer]

I had to give an advice to a girl that suffer from depression, loneliness and isolation because she lived in United States but now she lives in Peru and misses her family and friends .. could anyone check if it's correctly written, please?
Many thanks in anticipation.

Dear Homesick,
Many thanks for your letter - I hope you're fine. It must be hard being away from your family and friends in a totally different country. However, here is an advice that I hope will be helpful.
If I were you, I would try to buy a computer. The Internet is a great tool and allows us to communicate with others anywhere in the world. You can talk to your loved ones through the camera from the computer and see them too. Maybe, it is expensive but it would be the best option. In my opinion, you should go out and have fun with people you already know. The computer is a great idea, go right ahead! Good luck with your job. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Valfer

[Gillnetter]

I had to give an advice to a girl that suffer from depression, loneliness and isolation because she lived in United States but now she lives in Peru and misses her family and friends .. could anyone check if it's correctly written, please?
Many thanks in anticipation.

Dear Homesick,
Many thanks for your letter - I hope you're fine. It must be hard being away from your family and friends in a totally different country. However, here is an some advice that I hope will be helpful.
If I were you, I would try to buy a computer. The Internet is a great tool and it allows us to communicate with others anywhere in the world. You can talk to your loved ones through the camera from the computer and if both of you have cameras you can see them too. Maybe, it is expensive but it would be the best option. In my opinion, you should go out and have fun with people you already know. The computer is a great idea, go right ahead! Good luck with your job. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Valfer

gil