Help, exam next week!

[Martz]

I was to write a letter to a friend of mine who invited me to a sports camp in Canada, where he lives.
Many thanks in advance to those who'll correct it :)!

Dear Robin,
What a great news! I'd really love to join you in the sports camp, as I have nothing to do in July and it would be fantastic going to Canada again.
I'd prefer to stay in rooms, because even though it's summer it might be very cold in the mountains.
Also, I find it much more comfortable and it's easier to cook in proper kitchen rather than with a camp fire. You're lucky, I'm a fabolous cook! I know many Italian recipes, such as spaghetti with tomato sauce and pizza. Flying over to Canada a few days before the sports camp is a lovely idea. I would like to go sightseeing and visit the area where you live, while I'm staying at yours. But only if you have time and feel like it, of course.
Is there any musical event there when I'm coming? I know you love music so it would be nice to go to a concert together. What do you think about it? And in which days am I to arrive there exactly?
Let me know it soon!
Can't wait to see you

[Gillnetter]

I was to write a letter to a friend of mine who invited me to a sports camp in Canada, where he lives.
Many thanks in advance to those who'll correct it :)!

Dear Robin,
What a great news! I'd really love to join you in the sports camp, as I have nothing to do in July and it would be fantastic going to Canada again.
I'd prefer to stay in rooms, because even though it's summer it might be very cold in the mountains.
Also, I find it much more comfortable and it's easier to cook in a proper kitchen rather than with a campfire. You're lucky, I'm a fabolous fabulous cook! I know many Italian recipes, such as spaghetti with tomato sauce and pizza. Flying over to Canada a few days before the sports camp is a lovely idea. I would like to go sightseeing and visit the area where you live, while I'm staying at yours with you, but only if you have time and feel like it, of course.
Will there be Is there any musical event there when I'm coming? I know you love music so it would be nice to go to a concert together. What do you think about it? And, in which days when am I to arrive there exactly?
Let me know it soon!
Can't wait to see you

Gil

[Martz]

thank you so much