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Could you check my sentence please
"My ambition is to work as a program manager for international NGOs promoting child rights. In that perspective, I regard gaining experience of proposal and report writing as a constructive feature."
I am wondering about "constructive feature", not sure it make sense...
Thanks for your help
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Re: Could you check my sentence please

Originally Posted by
andouze
"My ambition is to work as a program manager for international NGOs promoting child rights. In that perspective, I regard gaining experience of proposal and report writing as a constructive feature."
I am wondering about "constructive feature", not sure it make sense...
Thanks for your help
If I were you, I would write like this.
"My goal is to work as a program manager in an international NGO that promotes better rights for children. In this regard, I see gaining experience of working on proposals and writing reports as a productive feature."
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Last edited by Barb_D; 30-May-2010 at 19:30.
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Re: Could you check my sentence please
hello !!
Well thanks for your suggestion, what do you mean by " Iahve more experts in my team" ? Because as you might have understand I am looking for a job / intership thus I need hips of help 
Thanks again for your time,
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