My honest feeling about this is that it's too long. I have always wondered about the value of these statements as they're always going to be positive- no one is going to write 'An enthusiastic team player with time-keeping issues'. The reader will be able to get things like your experience with leading brands from the Professional Experience part. I would consider reducing the length, but, as I said earlier, this is a personal view and others may see it differently.
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