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    aj.aditya is offline Newbie
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    Default E mail to a friend for information and assistance

    i wanted some information regarding the examination postponement and just wanna nurture the relationship as well

    please advise me on grammar and appropriate thought structure



    email goes like this

    Hi there!

    how r u?

    have u heard about the postponement of examination.

    bro could u please forward me the new date sheet of the exams if u have one.

    also, have u bought any book on business regulation. if yes,
    please bring it on the CPC exam date to the centre as the
    book seller told me there is none available on the B/R.

    and how about life and job, i hope everything is in order and as per plans.

    with best regards
    aditya

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    Default Re: E mail to a friend for information and assistance

    Quote Originally Posted by aj.aditya View Post
    i wanted some information regarding the examination postponement and just wanna nurture the relationship as well

    please advise me on grammar and appropriate thought structure



    email goes like this

    Hi there!

    how r u?

    have u heard about the postponement of examination.

    bro could u please forward me the new date sheet of the exams if u have one.

    also, have u bought any book on business regulation. if yes,
    please bring it on the CPC exam date to the centre as the
    book seller told me there is none available on the B/R.

    and how about life and job, i hope everything is in order and as per plans.

    with best regards
    aditya
    I suggest that you get a good English dictionary and a text on English grammar. The following are some changes that are needed -
    wanna is not a correct word - want to
    r is a character, not a word - are
    u is a character, not a word - you
    bro?? possibly brother?
    B/R - no idea of what this means
    aditya - a name? If so, Aditya

    Once this piece is written in the best standard English that you can manage, someone will comment on it.

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