Need some help on writing

[Masayo Sato]

Hi, I am a Japanese. My English is very poor and it must be very good English. Technically, my paper has been accepted for publication in journal, but I must revise the English.

[Tdol]

It depends on the length- people will comment on writing, but what you're looking for is probably best handled by a proofreading service:
Proofreading - ESL Web Directory - UsingEnglish.com

[albrnsmith]

Hi,
Whether you are writing a journal and any news report for your publication, you should decide what information you want to convey.
I think you should hire a professional writer,who can write for your audience..!