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[sweetflower]

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This Bachelor thesis should answer the central research-leading question: „Which requirements exist for the postadjustment of International Law for the restriction of deployment of landmines for the purpose of the restriction or removal of the mine problems?” At the beginning, the basics of historical and technical background of landmines are elucidated, to provide the basis for a further processing of this issue. Furthermore basic concepts are explained with regard to the mine clearance. Chosen contracts of International Law in relation to landmines are shown, valued and scrutinized. In particular the so-called Ottawa convention is treated within the scope of this chapter. The final consideration shows existing abuses in already existing international agreements. Besides the final consideration offers action possibilities and shows possible consequences of the action possibilities.

[sweetflower]

this is really important for me- so please help me.
it lasts for an English-speaking 5 minutes.

thank you in advance