Fce Informail Letter or E-mail

[daniel2011]

Could you please have a look at my piece of writing and give it a score? I'd really appreciate it!

I know I should include the link of the task or at least the image but I wasn't allowed becuase this is my first thread and I need to have more than 5 of them!

THE ANSWER TO THE TASK:

Dear Sam,

Glad to hear from you again. This is just to let you know that I’m fascinated with the idea of being painted.

Listen, I was wondering if you might like to paint me in the garden because I’m having my house repaired at the moment and it’s actually a real mess! Anyway, I think you’ll love all the flowers and bushes in my house as well as my swimming pool. You’ll absolutely adore the view!

Last time you wrote, you’ve also said something about an object important to me and after thinking for a while I made up my mind and chose my old dad's piano becuase it's a priceless possession to me. What do you reckon?

By the way, should I be dressed in formal or informal clothes once you start painting? You can come and visit me so that we can fix up when to start the painting and other stuff.

Looking forward to hearing from you again. All the best.

Daniel,

[daniel2011]

Please, could someone check my writing piece?