Letter of Apology

You have promised your boss that you will work some extra hours next weekend. Due to a family problem you will be unable to fulfil your promise.Write a letter of apology to your boss explaining your reasons and promising to make it up to him/her.

I wrote something. Is this alright?

Dear Mr Johnson,

Please accept my sincerest apologies for unfulfilled promise. Due to a family problem, I will be unable to do some extra work next weekend.

I must explain you why I will not be able to work next weekend. My grandfather got ill and we are going to visit him. Because my relatives live far away, I will not be at home all weekend.

I will try to do some work at home if possible. In an attempt to make it up, I could work longer this week, too.

I hope you will accept my apologies for inconvenience caused.

Yours sincerely,
Harrison (employee)

This sounds like a homework assignment.

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Originally Posted by fivejedjon

This sounds like a homework assignment.

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And it is. So is it ok?

From the forum guidelines:

We do not do homework or assignments for people. If we suspect that a question is an assignment, we will not answer it.

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Originally Posted by fivejedjon

From the forum guidelines:

We do not do homework or assignments for people. If we suspect that a question is an assignment, we will not answer it.

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Well, I dont want you to do it for me. I just want that someone could help me and find mistakes or give some advices.

So could you help me? C'mon people, I wrote it myself I am just asking for some help with mistakes.

So could you help me? C'mon people, I wrote it myself I am just asking for some help with mistakes.

By the way, I found analogical thread, where one memeber said, that "The first step is for you to write something. You have the basic information. Write something and we will comment on it."

http://www.usingenglish.com/forum/le...r-apology.html

So could someone help me?