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[francycham]

I want to make a request to my manager to hire two cleaning boys to my company- please see below.
Please find attached quotations received from Cleaning Services Companies to hire two cleaners for our company to clean vehicles and other cleaning related jobs. We have already two temporary cleaners are working with us since 2 years and we are paying them monthly USD…as basic salary plus USD…. for washing each vehicles. Now we require two more cleaners for our new office. for cleaning vehicles. Therefore, request you to please hire two more cleaners from outside cleaning company.

[Gillnetter]

I want to make a request to my manager to hire two cleaning boys to for my company- please see below.
Please find attached quotations received from cleaning services companies to hire two cleaners for our company to clean vehicles and other cleaning related jobs. We have already have two temporary cleaners are who have been working with us since 2 for two years and we are paying them monthly USD monthly…as basic salary plus USD…. for washing each vehicles vehicle. Now we require two more cleaners for our new office. for cleaning vehicles. Therefore, I request that you to please hire two more cleaners from an outside cleaning company.

Gil