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[akm2446]

You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expedition, which organize such trips. In your letter :

- Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.

- State what your skills and experience are.

- Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

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Dear Sir / Madam

I am writing this letter to request for voluntary work in Angola. I graduated from university last year. I would like to use my academic knowledge for helping people in a developing country. In addition, it would be better if I could obtain work experiences by this job.

Actually, I am a computer engineer and I was teaching computer courses during the studying in university, I have two years experience in this job and I am expert in computer software programming.

As it is mentioned before, I would like to work in Angola because I have travelled to this country many times and I am familiar with its people and culture. I inform you that I am ready to work there for two years. I hope that I would be helpful for this job.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Yours faithfully,

John Smith.

[billmcd]

You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expedition, which organize such trips. In your letter :

- Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.

- State what your skills and experience are.

- Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

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Dear Sir or Madam:

I am writing this letter to request for voluntary work in Angola. I graduated from university last year. I would like to use my academic knowledge for helping to help people in a developing country. In addition, it would be better if I could obtain work experiences by this job. (Is this sentence really necessary?)

Actually, I am a computer engineer and I was teaching computer courses during the studying my study in university. I have two years experience in this job and I am expert in computer software programming.

As it is mentioned before, I would like to work in Angola because I have travelled to this country many times and I am familiar with its people and culture. (Where is it mentioned before?) I inform you that I am ready prepared to work there for two years. I hope that I would can be helpful in this endeavor and that you will consider my request.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Yours faithfully,

John Smith.

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[akm2446]

thanks for your help.