I need HELP with a cover letter

[Sparafucile]

Dear Sir or Madam
I appreciate this opportunity to provide further background information in support of my application for entrance to the Economics and Management program at the University of London. I completed my Degree in Biochemistry from the Autonomous University of Barcelona in 2004 completing my training with an online Master in Quality, Safety and environment. I work currently as Plant Quality manager in a Baby Food company in Barcelona with partners and customers in Europe, America, and Asia.

Biochemistry is a scientific and technical degree but, as a Plant Quality manager, I have gained valuable experience managing technical projects, industrial processes, and manufacturing. But industrial plant it’s only a part of the company, and I want to continue learning and understand how organizations work and how they interact.

I am extremely interested in obtaining a position at the University of London, as its programs have an excellent reputation that is known worldwide. It’s not my first distance learning experience and I’m sure I will success.
Thank you for considering my application

Sincerely yours

[billmcd]

Dear Sir or Madam
I appreciate this opportunity to provide further background information in support of my application for entrance to the Economics and Management program at the University of London. I completed my Degree in Biochemistry from the Autonomous University of Barcelona in 2004 completing my training with an online Master in Quality, Safety and environment. I work currently as Plant Quality manager in a Baby Food company in Barcelona with partners and customers in Europe, America, and Asia.

Biochemistry is a scientific and technical degree but, as a Plant Quality manager, I have gained valuable experience managing technical projects, industrial processes, and manufacturing. But the industrial plant it’s is only a part of the company, and I want to continue to learning and understand how organizations work and how they interact.

I am extremely interested in obtaining a position at the University of London, as its programs have an excellent reputation that is known worldwide. It’s not my first distance learning experience and I’m sure I will succeed.
Thank you for considering my application

Sincerely yours

Nice work. A few minor changes.

[Sparafucile]

Thanks!!!