please correct this

[rajmee]

My wife had left for native place on 16th of sep 2011 because of some urgency, and I could not intimate L.T.C section for L.T.C advance, so know I am applying for L.T.C advance for both of us as I am going to my native place on 15th oct 2011.
I request you to kindly look into the matter and consider my case for L.T.C advance.
I regret the delay and inconvenience caused. I shall remain grate full to you for the same.

[billmcd]

My wife had left for her native place (do you mean for her native country?) on 16th of sep 2011 because of some urgency, and I could not intimate (??) L.T.C section for L.T.C advance, so know (now?) I am applying for L.T.C advance for both of us as I am going to my native place (see above) on 15th Oct 2011.
I request that you to kindly look into the matter and consider my case for L.T.C advance.
I regret the delay and inconvenience caused. I shall remain grateful to you for the same. your consideration.

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